Evening Light

jayegirl

Hello, I am working on being more deliberate in taking photographs. I'm not a pro, its just something I seriously enjoy. I have a bit more time now to actually try to learn something. Suggestions critiques welcome.
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hawkeye978

Nice set. I like the lighting and details in #2. It looks like it could be straightened a little or perhaps correct keystoning. The building on the left is tipping to the right. That could be keystoning or it's wide angle lens distortion. All can be corrected in Photoshop.

jayegirl

Thank you. I agree on number two, I worked on it but haven't figured out to do it yet

dlplumer

Nice set J girl. I like #1.

SimpsonBrothers

#1 Awesome, just straighten the horizon line.
#2 Nice details, see if you can fix the blown out AT&T sign and fix the perspective distortion
#3 again, perspective distortion
#4 see if you can darken the sky a bit and run the highpass filter on the boat reflection
#5 straighten horizon line, nice though
#6 very nice, I would brighten the water reflection
#7 too much tree

Eia

#1 for sure - that is my favorite. I also like #4 with the boat reflection - I think its interesting to look at. Can't wait to see more!

jayegirl

Thank you everyone. I obviously have a problem with seeing a straight line! I try in camera and again in Lightroom/Photoshop with the grids

Tango

SimpsonBrothers wrote: »

#1 Awesome, just straighten the horizon line.
#2 Nice details, see if you can fix the blown out AT&T sign and fix the perspective distortion
#3 again, perspective distortion
#4 see if you can darken the sky a bit and run the highpass filter on the boat reflection
#5 straighten horizon line, nice though
#6 very nice, I would brighten the water reflection
#7 too much tree

+1

J, really good job working the high dynamics! now work on the nits and you have some really nice images!

snowman1

Very nice,

Doug



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