Sorry - some critique. Your model has beautiful face. (and figure must be also good-looking). But...<BR>
1) This beard looks like painted on the skin and thus makes me smile. <BR>
2) All these tatoos, being curves, attract much more attention then the strong face.
3) His thick lips in this expression are looking like prepared for a kiss, and this makes a contradiction with the expression of the eyes (was it your aim to make the viewer scared?)<BR>
If you wanted to concentrate my attention on models body - there must be more of it in the composition. If you wanted to show his beautiful face - I'd suggest to hide these tatoo...<BR>
Thank you,... Yuri
I don't think I interpret this the same as Yuri. This is just a portrait in my opinion. If that is the case then this is simply a photograph that represents Travis. I don't believe the tattoos are distracting, they are just part of the person.Now if this photo was made for the purpose of clothing then I would have to agree with Yuri's comments.
like both
great pics -- real connection between the model and the camera and like the processing. I like the brick background on the second pic --- fits with the mood.
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1) This beard looks like painted on the skin and thus makes me smile. <BR>
2) All these tatoos, being curves, attract much more attention then the strong face.
3) His thick lips in this expression are looking like prepared for a kiss, and this makes a contradiction with the expression of the eyes (was it your aim to make the viewer scared?)<BR>
If you wanted to concentrate my attention on models body - there must be more of it in the composition. If you wanted to show his beautiful face - I'd suggest to hide these tatoo...<BR>
Thank you,... Yuri
DManning Photography
great pics -- real connection between the model and the camera and like the processing. I like the brick background on the second pic --- fits with the mood.