Magaera

Brewster

Comments most welcome,
thanks in advance,
Brewster

Yuri Pautov

I like her expression and this soft warm light. Still. I'd like to see better turn with full right eye to see. Thank you,... Yuri

Brewster

Thanks Yuri,
That's the first thing I would fix too! Just a wee bit more of that right eye!

Darren Troy C

The crop is so tight, I'm distracted by the material. I personally am left wondering why it's covering the face a bit. Looks like she's clutching some of it also but tough to tell....so hence the confusion on my part. Just me, though. And it seems slightly underexposed....? ...or maybe it's just that the eye area is dark.

Scott_Quier

I, on the other hand, think the crop is not quite tight enough. Were this my photo, I think I would crop from the top .... from just below where the white fabric meets her hairline. I'm thinking there's too much of the white and this would reduce it's impact a bit and allow a better viewer focus on her wonderful expression.

Brewster

Thanks Darren and Scott -
I'll throw up a couple of samples..................

well ok, one sample

Icebear

Now yer talkin'!

Brewster

Thanks Guys,
3 tries for a quarter, and I may have got it!

sweet caroline

The tighter crop works much better. Her eyes seem a bit too dark, and the whites don't look right. Love the expression.

Scott_Quier

sweet caroline wrote: »

The tighter crop works much better. Her eyes seem a bit too dark, and the whites don't look right. Love the expression.

- A little eye work and this is finished!