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Gary & Mary - The Wedding

Jeremy WinterbergJeremy Winterberg Registered Users Posts: 1,233 Major grins
edited August 18, 2010 in Weddings
On my blog can be found a few of my favorites from their wedding. I shot it back on June 26th, but shortly after I somehow got mono and was out for over a month. I lost 25 lbs and couldn't do anything but sleep pretty much.

Anyways, I'm feeling much better now (about 85% normal) so I finally got around to editing them (thankfully they were very patient and understood I was sick!)..

http://jeremydwayne.com/?p=638

Teaser to make you go there. :D

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Jer

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    DanspageDanspage Registered Users Posts: 196 Major grins
    edited August 14, 2010
    Nice work

    With my luck the rings would fall in to the car window.
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    Jeremy WinterbergJeremy Winterberg Registered Users Posts: 1,233 Major grins
    edited August 14, 2010
    Danspage wrote: »
    Nice work

    With my luck the rings would fall in to the car window.

    Thanks, not bad for my second wedding eh?

    I never even thought about that! I probably wouldn't of done it if I had lol..
    Jer
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    QarikQarik Registered Users Posts: 4,959 Major grins
    edited August 16, 2010
    you got some very nice detail shots. imo the skin tones look a touch muddy. I would toss the kid picture as well..it's cute but if he's not in a little suit then it loses context.
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    Jeremy WinterbergJeremy Winterberg Registered Users Posts: 1,233 Major grins
    edited August 18, 2010
    Qarik wrote: »
    you got some very nice detail shots. imo the skin tones look a touch muddy. I would toss the kid picture as well..it's cute but if he's not in a little suit then it loses context.

    Removed! Thanks for pointing that out, didn't think about it in that way. I'll recalibrate my monitor.. its been a while, it may be off.
    Jer
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    divamumdivamum Registered Users Posts: 9,021 Major grins
    edited August 18, 2010
    Agree with Quarik - some really nice detail shots, and the ring shot in particular is terrific.

    I will say that I sometimes find your backgrounds are distracting - the teaser you have posted above is perilously close to "tree out of head" and the white blob in the rh background grabs my eye too (clone it out, or just crop the whole thing much closer to lose tree as well). And those doors behind the cupcake tower really bother me - not sure if you had another possible angle there; if not, it might have been worth doing something artsy with shallow DOF to minimise those doors (and the molding on the wall which, until I looked closely, I thought was a broom handle propped up.... deal.gif).
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