Please critique my websites...
I took a website design course this past spring and have built a couple of websites for my photography...
www.jamadophotography.com
www.babyphotographydenver.com
www.senior-pictures-denver.com
www.wedding-photographer-denver.net
www.jamadophotography.com
www.babyphotographydenver.com
www.senior-pictures-denver.com
www.wedding-photographer-denver.net
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Comments
1) Please don't put "-" in your domain names. Yes, they're good for SEO, but a pain in the butt to type. It breaks up the "flow".
2) Speaking of "pictures". You're a photographer. You're capturing memories. You do photography and portrait sessions. "Pictures" are what people take on family vacation. The "pictures" you're displaying on your website is your "portfolio".
3) Don't make me scroll.
4) Have someone proof your sites for spelling, grammar, and punctuation mistakes.
As I said, that's just my initial observation.
Neal Jacob
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-joel (who's had some training in usability engineering)
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