Hi Boutte, #2 is so offbeat I think it could have done with a more offbeat point of view, a different perspective, to take it over the top. Hard to say what exactly without being in the scene (maybe even crop right in on the boat in its overgrown grassy sea and give it a grungy b@w treatment). I echo what Craig said about #3. I just wish you had got the water surface a bit crisper, maybe put a focus point on it rather than on the sky.
Hi Boutte, #2 is so offbeat I think it could have done with a more offbeat point of view, a different perspective, to take it over the top. Hard to say what exactly without being in the scene (maybe even crop right in on the boat in its overgrown grassy sea and give it a grungy b@w treatment). I echo what Craig said about #3. I just wish you had got the water surface a bit crisper, maybe put a focus point on it rather than on the sky.
All interesting shots.
Neil
I think the water isn't out of focus so much as it was moving.
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Really like all the images, first one is full of details and questions, why
such a young life is gone so soon.
My favorite of this series is the Sunset Shot, that's so very well done, and
love the beautiful hues and colors.
Very nicely done.
Craig
Burleson, Texas
All interesting shots.
Neil
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What was the shutter speed?
Neil
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