#57 first (late) attempt c&c please?

oldtown_dreamer

this is all i've been able to come up with so far. i'll probably have some time tomorrow to try a few more things. maybe.



thanks in advance,

liflander

This is cute! I like the arrangement of objects. I think I would like to see the focus on the cow (the cow is currently out of focus).
cheers,
Mark

kdotaylor

I agree...like the idea! I wonder if you could get a better background without a line through it (edge of the table), though.

tinamarie52

I like the idea. Shoot a little sharper with perhaps a bit mor depth of field.

I agree that you could change backgrounds to enhance the image.

Chris

oldtown_dreamer

thanks all,

i've taken all your input and after 1/2 box of soggy cereal and over 100 shots, this is it.

tinamarie52

Much crisper, with the cow in focus. Nice progress.

chris

kdotaylor

Yes! Nice--I like it a lot.

travelways

Very cute and great idea

liflander

Yes, very nice retake. Looking good!
There are some distracting color casts on the background that change color from bottom to top of screen, but just nitpicking.
Cheers!

dnie

new one looks great!