These aren't doing it for me on several levels. 1st of all there not a shot where the model is looking at the camera or even looking purposefully if not at the camera..they all seem off the cuff and in transition. Also there are cut off heads and limbs everywhere..but not cut off enough to be on purpose. Try shooting much wider or much closer. The tilts aren't really helping either. Do you have others from the set?
These aren't doing it for me on several levels. 1st of all there not a shot where the model is looking at the camera or even looking purposefully if not at the camera..they all seem off the cuff and in transition. Also there are cut off heads and limbs everywhere..but not cut off enough to be on purpose. Try shooting much wider or much closer. The tilts aren't really helping either. Do you have others from the set?
Though there is room for technical improvement in these shots, I think they're quite nice. To hell with rules; I enjoy your originality. <img src="https://us.v-cdn.net/6029383/emoji/thumb.gif" border="0" alt="" >
somehow in a group with 10+ photographers it's get to get the model to look at me...
And that's exactly why I don't participate in the group (multiple photogs/models) shoots (anymore, that is. One attempt was more than enough )
Oh, and BTW, your new images do not show
one more question, when I'm trying to upload the picture online, I usually resize them to 400x600, or 600x800, and it kinda looses a lot of color, contrast and sharpness, how do you guys upload your pictures? if it's original size it'll be at least like 2M.
Jill, I think most folks just upload everything at full size. My file ssize are from 2-4 meg. What service are you using? If you are getting more serious about photography then it maybe worth it to look into photo hosting sites that can easily handle larger file sizes and can resize photos automagically for you when you post them (smugmug, flickr, etc).
The 1st of your new set is getting in the ball park now!
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These aren't doing it for me on several levels. 1st of all there not a shot where the model is looking at the camera or even looking purposefully if not at the camera..they all seem off the cuff and in transition. Also there are cut off heads and limbs everywhere..but not cut off enough to be on purpose. Try shooting much wider or much closer. The tilts aren't really helping either. Do you have others from the set?
14-24 24-70 70-200mm (vr2)
85 and 50 1.4
45 PC and sb910 x2
http://www.danielkimphotography.com
Op,
Though there is room for technical improvement in these shots, I think they're quite nice. To hell with rules; I enjoy your originality. <img src="https://us.v-cdn.net/6029383/emoji/thumb.gif" border="0" alt="" >
how about these 3?
Oh, and BTW, your new images do not show
ahhh..that explains it. the next 3 are not showing up
14-24 24-70 70-200mm (vr2)
85 and 50 1.4
45 PC and sb910 x2
http://www.danielkimphotography.com
The 1st of your new set is getting in the ball park now!
14-24 24-70 70-200mm (vr2)
85 and 50 1.4
45 PC and sb910 x2
http://www.danielkimphotography.com