HOLY WOW for #3!!!!!!!! A stunningly beautiful portrait (and child!). Your son's eyes are also an amazing color as I remember (from some fall portraits last year). I LOVE the gold overtone of her eyes! Just WOW! I often find it hard to achieve such a wonderful focus in hats...You did a great job here!
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I have one comment, and I hope it doesn't come across as negative. The eyes bother me in the last shot because of the tilted crop. The catchlights would look wonderful if horizontal, but the word that came to my mind as soon as I saw the image was "demonic." I realize that's weird, cause your little girl is absolutely precious, but those catchlights oriented at that angle just triggered a bad reaction. Maybe I'm the only one. If it were mine, I'd try to rotate the pupils. I think the image is worth the work.
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The exposure is perfect on #3 but I'm not fond of the tilt. I like #1 but can't decide what the tennis shoes do for it. It could be that she is a little tom boy dreaming about running around the sandlot. Great shots.
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I have one comment, and I hope it doesn't come across as negative. The eyes bother me in the last shot because of the tilted crop. The catchlights would look wonderful if horizontal, but the word that came to my mind as soon as I saw the image was "demonic." I realize that's weird, cause your little girl is absolutely precious, but those catchlights oriented at that angle just triggered a bad reaction. Maybe I'm the only one. If it were mine, I'd try to rotate the pupils. I think the image is worth the work.
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#3 is the money shot, I also like #1 but maybe is not close enough.thumb
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No 1 just catches my attention, love the mood, love the contrast, love the colors
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