Two More from Medical Camp

Awais Yaqub

Patti

I particularly like #1 Awais. I like the hi key treatment and the contrast between the young boy and the elder to the left.

michswiss

I really like the first, but I'm torn with whether the man on the far left should be cropped out. For me, it adds a third component to the composition that sort of detracts from the juxtaposition of the young boy facing us and the men facing away.

Awais Yaqub

Thanks, i am also not sure about the man on left. And she is young girl not boy, look at textures on her dress.

lizzard_nyc

Awais Yaqub wrote: »

Thanks, i am also not sure about the man on left. And she is young girl not boy, look at textures on her dress.

Wow on #1--this one is just freaking fantastic---Love it.

I also like #2 as a portrait very much.

The conversion is right up my alley.

Flyinggina

Both are excellent photographs, but, for me. #1 is a real winner.

I can understand the point about cropping out the man on the left. I agree it would make the picture even stronger.

When I first looked at the photograph, though, all I saw was the child and the men with their backs to the camera. After reading the suggestion from michswiss, I went back to look again and saw the man walking into the picture.

Virginia

Richard

michswiss wrote: »

I really like the first, but I'm torn with whether the man on the far left should be cropped out. For me, it adds a third component to the composition that sort of detracts from the juxtaposition of the young boy facing us and the men facing away.

completely. Less is definitely more in this one. Great shot.

Stella7d

These are wonderful! I love the B&W conversion.

Awais Yaqub

Thanks guys for looking and comments!