Senior Portraits

brown243brown243 Registered Users Posts: 8 Beginner grinner
edited September 5, 2010 in People
Here are some of my recent Senior Portraits that I have taken. What do you guys think? Be honest, criticism is the best way to learn. Thanks! =]

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Comments

  • AndyAndy Registered Users Posts: 50,016 Major grins
    edited September 4, 2010
    They could be great, but they are underexposed and will print poorly :(

    See the difference here?

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  • reyvee61reyvee61 Registered Users Posts: 1,877 Major grins
    edited September 5, 2010
    I agree with Andy but I also feel that the skin tones are poor and will result in what is known as "lobster people" in print as well.
    This is on the color portraits of course but on the first and fifth the skin tones are just off plus I feel your efforts to whiten the teeth are way over the top and look out of place exposure wise against the rest of the image.
    I think your compositions are fine as are your locations though
    Yo soy Reynaldo
  • brown243brown243 Registered Users Posts: 8 Beginner grinner
    edited September 5, 2010
    Thank you Andy for the tip about my pictures being underexposed. I never thought about that, and I went back and edited the pictures I am working on right now and they look 10X better.

    Also reyvee61 I actually did not whiten any teeth in any of these photos. In the first and fifth photo, I color monochromed the pictures and reduced the vibrancy and that was it. But I see where you are coming from about his teeth being extrememly white. Thanks for the help tho =]
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