My first time

sscrappingpickle

I had a great opportunity to second shoot two wedding last month. Thought I would share a few them here. CC welcome, I'll try to take it like a big girl.
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Qarik

it may help to post larger sizes as well as more shots of the bride and groom..many of these are detail shots. That said..to be honest these aren't really doing much for me. 1st one is blown out, the rest are not very compelling conmpositionally and are poorly processed imo. Do you have other shots we can look at?

sscrappingpickle

Qarik wrote: »

it may help to post larger sizes as well as more shots of the bride and groom..many of these are detail shots. That said..to be honest these aren't really doing much for me. 1st one is blown out, the rest are not very compelling conmpositionally and are poorly processed imo. Do you have other shots we can look at?

All right, although my first reaction was to run away I decided to see if I could improve a bit. I reedited the first one. Is that better? I'll get some more up in a bit. I am a total newbie at this and realize I still have a long way to go.

Bsimon

Great improvement!

Qarik

sscrappingpickle wrote: »

All right, although my first reaction was to run away I decided to see if I could improve a bit. I reedited the first one. Is that better? I'll get some more up in a bit. I am a total newbie at this and realize I still have a long way to go.

yup..much better..add a vignette to it and it's now a keeper.