First post here in GF! (nsfw)

wildviperwildviper Registered Users Posts: 560 Major grins
edited October 2, 2010 in Go Figure
Apprecaite any critiques to this one.

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Sorry for the watermark..it was already uploaded that way.
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  • AllenAllen Registered Users Posts: 10,013 Major grins
    edited September 14, 2010
    Nice, my only nit is the head seems to be disconnected from the body. Maybe less shadow.
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  • NikolaiNikolai Registered Users Posts: 19,035 Major grins
    edited September 14, 2010
    Welcome to GF!thumb.gif
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  • misterbmisterb Banned Posts: 601 Major grins
    edited September 14, 2010
    Very Nice
  • anwmn1anwmn1 Registered Users Posts: 3,469 Major grins
    edited September 14, 2010
    I agree with Allen on this one. I think there needs to be a little more light on the neck. For me this is because I think the eye needs to be brighter. The eye cannot be lightened without the neck also being lightened as it will just look completely unnatural.

    Love the skin tone on her chest and shoulder- exposure on the bra seems perfect. Just need to lighten the neck and eye. thumb.gif
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  • wildviperwildviper Registered Users Posts: 560 Major grins
    edited September 16, 2010
    Thanx all. Will work on doing the lighting up. :) Such hard work! :P
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  • eL eSs VeeeL eSs Vee Registered Users Posts: 1,243 Major grins
    edited September 25, 2010
    Try lightening the entire image by about ten percent and then dodge her eye to lighten it a bit more. I think that will save the image.

    Otherwise. . . . thumb.gif
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  • AllenAllen Registered Users Posts: 10,013 Major grins
    edited October 2, 2010
    Allen wrote: »
    Nice, my only nit is the head seems to be disconnected from the body. Maybe less shadow.
    Just realized why I said this. The face is an island without connectivity to the
    body and the eye doesn't flow back to the body. Kinda like a fence. Maybe
    lightening a narrow part of the neck up to the face edge would provide a line
    for the eye to catch and flow back.
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