Engrossed

NyarthlopicNyarthlopic Registered Users Posts: 274 Major grins
edited September 24, 2010 in Street and Documentary
My first posted picture. Feedback would be wonderful, even if it's "constructive." Very much am amateur and this is the best way to grow!

1020237614_MSt4a-L-1.jpg

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  • lizzard_nyclizzard_nyc Registered Users Posts: 4,056 Major grins
    edited September 24, 2010
    Hey there and welcome-glad you are starting to post.

    I want to like this photo, it reminds me a little of Patti's recent photo "what's your story".
    Yes I am left wondering about this person and who she is, but the thing is, I really don't care. It doesn't pull me in and stay with me like the other shot. It's missing something.


    Also your conversion could use a smidge more contrast. It's a little muddy.

    Now you've gone and waded in and you see we don't bite. KEEP POSTING.
    Liz A.
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  • misterbmisterb Banned Posts: 601 Major grins
    edited September 24, 2010
    That's a good start.. I would have shot from the path to "see" into her world.
  • NyarthlopicNyarthlopic Registered Users Posts: 274 Major grins
    edited September 24, 2010
    Hi guys. Thanks a ton for the feedback. Very lots appreciated. (I English speak very goodly ;-)

    And I'll definitely be posting more. The whole "street" thing didn't really appeal to me until I started to see the work posted in this forum, honestly. Now I'm not sure I'll be able to get enough...so many shots to get. So I'm venturing out! :-)

    And for reference, here's the original.

    1020590372_jAeHr-L.jpg

    Liz, maybe the garbage can was missing? ;-) j/k
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