Weekly Assignment #148: Your Worst Nightmare 2010
Nikolai
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We did this in 2008 (#96: http://www.dgrin.com/showthread.php?t=109908).
I promised to get back to it in a year, but the job (or, more specifically, the lack of thereof ;-) interfered and we never had a chance to revisit it.
Now, that we're back in business, I think it's time to try it again, i.e. get a year-old image you honestly consider (one of) your best from that period and tear it (and yourself) a new 'un.
For the basic rules please look at the original thread (link above).
And here comes a twist. Since we concentrate on people's shooting now, it HAS to be a human subject.
With that in mind I seriously advise against submitting images of close family.
And another twist... Along with primary one-year-old entry, please also submit your most recent one, which you also consider your current top work. Mark it "Nightmare 2011". Neither you, nor anybody else is supposed to say a single word about it - now. But - as you have no doubt guessed already - it will be a subject for the Nightmare 2011:-)
Hopefully, this will keep us all busy while we're getting ready for 1-2-3, and sets a good starting point, so in a year or so we can check our progress...
So, Alex, dare to go first again? :wink
I promised to get back to it in a year, but the job (or, more specifically, the lack of thereof ;-) interfered and we never had a chance to revisit it.
Now, that we're back in business, I think it's time to try it again, i.e. get a year-old image you honestly consider (one of) your best from that period and tear it (and yourself) a new 'un.
For the basic rules please look at the original thread (link above).
And here comes a twist. Since we concentrate on people's shooting now, it HAS to be a human subject.
With that in mind I seriously advise against submitting images of close family.
And another twist... Along with primary one-year-old entry, please also submit your most recent one, which you also consider your current top work. Mark it "Nightmare 2011". Neither you, nor anybody else is supposed to say a single word about it - now. But - as you have no doubt guessed already - it will be a subject for the Nightmare 2011:-)
Hopefully, this will keep us all busy while we're getting ready for 1-2-3, and sets a good starting point, so in a year or so we can check our progress...
So, Alex, dare to go first again? :wink
"May the f/stop be with you!"
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LIGHTING
I think the lighting is pretty good but it would have been much better if I would have used a hair light. As it is, the hair is just a big black blob with no detail. I would have placed the key light on camera right and behind her so it was lighting from head down. I think you refer to this as short lighting since the side of the face that is lit is away from the camera. This would have added more detail to her hair and also created more flattering shadows on the face, giving it more dimension. I would have then used the same light position that I used here as key but as fill.
COMPOSITION
From a composition stand point, I thought it was good but if I were to shoot this again, I would probably shoot from a slightly higher position to capture more of her hand and arm. This would have also cause the bed to fill the entire background, getting rid of the distracting window frame in the current BG that I tried minimizing with PP.
TECHNIQUE
Focus is just a little off. Hard to tell at this size but if you pixel peep at 100% you'd see that the focus is sharpest on her nose, not eyes. Shot this at f/2.8.... Not sure why. Would stop down lens a bit if doing it over.
POST PROCESSING
Lastly, I still feel good about the PP. I think the conversion is nicely done. However, I think I went just a tad heavy on the skin work. There is detail but I was a little to eager to use the new skin smoothing techniques I learned back then. Now, I would go a bit lighter on the skin smoothing.
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Lighting
Uneven, with brights spots on the forehead, cheeks, noses, chins
Composition
Hands and arms are cut off, subjects are centered, nothing special here
Technique
Focus is soft on both subjects eyes, also learned here to stop down from 2.8 and select my AF point instead of focus and recompose.
Post Processing
Some redness in the skin of both subjects and needs a little more pop.
For Nightmare 2011, taken a week and half ago
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@Alex:
1) no praising, remember?
2) NM2011: I know the difficulties of selecting the best image, but since we're looking for a "class representative" it doesn't have to be "one and only", so if you have several/many that you like at the moment close your eyes and pick one, no one is going to question your judgement.
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Ability to self-critique and accept (even the most brutal) critique from others is, IMHO, one of the most important features that differentiates serious photographers from snapshooters.
IMHO one can't really improve if there is no concept of what has to be improved to begin with, and no ability to identify one's mistakes and learn from them.
I *really* expect everybody who is serious about participating in this Class to go through this one...
Nightmare 2010
Lighting
Lighting seems flat, lack of shadows means no real show of depth.
Composition
Maybe crop just a little looser on the bottom. Allow the complete soother and more important the end of the neck allowing the neck end in frame with the shirt.
Get reflection of the mother in the glasses as well. Could have turned this into a unique family portrait instead of just father and daughter. Would have been nice to get both actually, with and without mother.
Post processing
Remove unwanted elements, such as the polarizing label on the glasses and my knees in the reflection. Also remove green cast behind the soother. Also extra miscellaneous people in reflection.
White band on hat is looking a bit pinkish, hopefully just because I have not calibrated my new monitor yet, but unlikely.
CA in VW logo. CA is possibly the reason for the pinkish looking lines on the hat as well.
Colours on the soother look way off. There is a distinct lack in gradual change of colours and the highlights look just aweful on the soother.
Technique
Shooting at f/2.8 on the 70-200 f/2.8L IS tends to leave things a tad soft so it is okay to shoot at something other then wide open and at ISO 100.
Focus seems to be slightly behind the eyes. But with a DOF of someplace around 1/4-1/2 inch the margin of error is ridiculously small. Bokeh is possible when you are close to minimum focus distance and stepped down.
Nightmare 2011