A senior shot, with pun

Mr. QuietMr. Quiet Registered Users Posts: 1,047 Major grins
edited October 10, 2010 in People
All critique is loved and looked for :thumb

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If you work at something hard enough, you WILL achieve your goal. "Me"

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  • fizzyfizzfizzyfizz Registered Users Posts: 61 Big grins
    edited October 9, 2010
    To be brutally honest, I think the composition here is all wrong.
    The gentleman's hand appears uncomfortable and awkward whilst his face is soft.
    Perhaps placing him further up the steps would've been nicer? A tighter crop even?
    Sorry, don't mean to sound unkind.
  • NikolaiNikolai Registered Users Posts: 19,035 Major grins
    edited October 9, 2010
    Aaron,
    It looks like you worked hard enough to achieve the goal of getting a look of a grainy, out-of-focus film snapshot taken during the harsh midday light with a single-use plastic lens $5 camera and developed at a local gas station.
    Congratulations, the goal IS achieved. mwink.gifthumb.gifclap
    "May the f/stop be with you!"
  • VayCayMomVayCayMom Registered Users Posts: 1,870 Major grins
    edited October 9, 2010
    A senior pun.. this is a photo shoot by a senior, as in old person. Maybe a real photo from way back? perhaps even you!
    Trudy
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  • Mr. QuietMr. Quiet Registered Users Posts: 1,047 Major grins
    edited October 10, 2010
    Ok people... Nikolai is spot on mwink.gif That is the effect I was trying to get out of the photo after I saw it in photoshop. I have of the same shot, but cropped tighter. And yes, this picture was taken by me. rolleyes1.gifroflrolleyes1.gif
    If you work at something hard enough, you WILL achieve your goal. "Me"

    D200
    NIKKOR 50mm f/1.4 D
    Tamron SP AF90mm f/2.8 Di 1:1


    Welcome to my NEW website!

    Mr. Christoferson
  • reyvee61reyvee61 Registered Users Posts: 1,877 Major grins
    edited October 10, 2010
    All critique is looked and loved for :-)
    Yo soy Reynaldo
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