thanks for the comments. I did play with some settings, but let me go back and try to rework it. Then maybe you can tell me if I've improved. I'll try dodging (or burning, can never remember which) the lines a bit and see what happens. I'll try the sharpening. I wanto to say it was shot at 6400 so we'll see what happens. Thank you for your suggestions.
I'll try dodging (or burning, can never remember which) the lines a bit and see what happens.
What helped me remember: in the real world when you scorch or burn something it usually gets darker.
"Photography is not about the thing photographed. It is about how that thing looks photographed." Garry Winogrand Avatar credit: photograph by Duane Michals-picture of me, 'Smash Palace' album
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I like the shot though!
I do find those 2 white lines behind a bit off-putting. Have you tried playing around with contrast? Maybe try and sharpen it up a tad too.
What helped me remember: in the real world when you scorch or burn something it usually gets darker.
It is about how that thing looks photographed." Garry Winogrand
Avatar credit: photograph by Duane Michals- picture of me, 'Smash Palace' album