I think if the sharpener were more prominent in the picture it would be stronger - I know it's small (isn't that the idea?!), but it's hard to really see what it is in the photo. Maybe a different & closer angle (like it's so small the guy has to hold it up really close to see it)?
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Edit: saw it in the gallery with title, OK, but it makes the title carry the weight of the image, if that makes sense.
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