first fall e-session

quarkquark Registered Users Posts: 510 Major grins
edited October 27, 2010 in Weddings
Just as the leaves started to turn ....
cc welcome.

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  • quarkquark Registered Users Posts: 510 Major grins
    edited October 25, 2010
    bump. any suggestions guys? always trying to improve the portraits .... are they boring?
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  • urbanariesurbanaries Registered Users Posts: 2,690 Major grins
    edited October 25, 2010
    The good:

    -All are very nicely composed, sharp
    -The couple seems very relaxed with themselves and with you in every shot
    -I like the 8x10 crops thumb.gif
    -nice subject isolation in first and last

    The bad:
    -1- I think your processing could be used to help brighten their teeth; in this case I think your processing is actually making them discolored. Their eyes are a bit dark and could use some pop.
    2 - Maybe you had to be there but I just don't get this one. It is cute, just looks like a snapshot. Too much DOF. Maybe a tighter crop?
    3 - Cute idea, suffering from too much camera-awareness and on-camera flash shadows.
    4 - My favorite, love both their expressions (very very nice!) Maybe brighten eye sockets up a bit. The shade is your friend on sunny days, but experiment with their face's relation to the bright parts of the sky.


    Overall these are cute and I am sure they will like them!

    Lynne
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  • TenThirteenTenThirteen Registered Users Posts: 488 Major grins
    edited October 27, 2010
    I agree on the teeth thing, that's really discracting me on these... I like #4, but kind of want to see it in color?
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