Don Ricklin - Gear: Canon EOS 5D Mark III, was Pentax K7
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Richard, on further viewing I can see some nits that would improve the image, IMHO. One would be to have the rear stepping feet of the reversed person under lapping the erect shadow, as does the other person's actual one. More 'realistic'
And maybe make the shadow that goes with him, on the left, a more solid looking, as the real person is!
Just my 2¢,
Don
Don Ricklin - Gear: Canon EOS 5D Mark III, was Pentax K7
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Don: that foot does need work, you're right. I've gone back and forth about the shadow. Although logic would suggest it be opaque, it looked too featureless that way, and besides, who needs logic here? .
Don: that foot does need work, you're right. I've gone back and forth about the shadow. Although logic would suggest it be opaque, it looked too featureless that way, and besides, who needs logic here? .
Yeah, my Wife and I differed over that part of your image too. After all it IS your vision that counts here!
Don
Don Ricklin - Gear: Canon EOS 5D Mark III, was Pentax K7
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Don: I reworked it some, fixing the foot and making the torso thinner. I think it looks better now. Thanks for keeping me honest--whatever that means in this context .
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Don
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And maybe make the shadow that goes with him, on the left, a more solid looking, as the real person is!
Just my 2¢,
Don
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Don: that foot does need work, you're right. I've gone back and forth about the shadow. Although logic would suggest it be opaque, it looked too featureless that way, and besides, who needs logic here? .
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Yeah, my Wife and I differed over that part of your image too. After all it IS your vision that counts here!
Don
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seeing this. Hasn't improved all day. Thanks buddy
What I like too is that crisp Spanish light!
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Don: I reworked it some, fixing the foot and making the torso thinner. I think it looks better now. Thanks for keeping me honest--whatever that means in this context .