Paperclips (link to shot)

kidzmom

I was having way too much fun with paperclips yesterday. What do you all think? Does it hold visual intrest? Too bright? Too silly? Thoughts? Postive or negative I'm all ears

Here's the shot:
http://www.flickr.com/photos/freezethemomentphotography/5103843281/

Thanks so much for any comments or feedback.

Kelly

black mamba

Hey Kelly,

I like this shot a lot. It has great colors and the overall management of the scene is well handled: good composition, structure, and balance. Well done.

You'll get a lot more response and comments about your work if you'll post your shots directly to the forum. There's a tutorial that's posted on the forum that is easy to follow that will help you do that.

Good luck. I hope to see more of your work.

Tom

kidzmom

Thanks so much Tom for the feedback. I wasn't sure if it was too busy or flashy. I wanted color, vibrancy and a fun feel...a lot of expections from paperclips. Glad it worked for you. I appreciate your input. Thanks
Kelly

Richard

I agree with Tom that you'll get a better response if you include the image itself, not a link. It's just so much work to click on a link .

Very nice image. Great color. One nit for me is the faint reflection (if that's what it is) at the bottom of the two blue clips. I think it would be more fun if they were just pointing outward without the suggestion of another inward line. Know what I mean?

yoyostock

I liked the next shot - of the pencils even better. Reminds me of grade school...can almost smell the pencils being sharpened.

Nice!

Snowgirl

yoyostock wrote: »

I liked the next shot - of the pencils even better. Reminds me of grade school...can almost smell the pencils being sharpened.

Nice!

Hi. I really liked both of them and the use of natural light and reflective surfaces really make the shots for me. Well done.