Angry Man

tomnovytomnovy Registered Users Posts: 1,103 SmugMug Employee
edited October 25, 2010 in People
Hello,
new portrait of Dennis.
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Equipment used:

Light - Bowens Strobe GM500 with a beauty dish and a grid in the middle to get the harsh light on his facfe.
Camera: Canon 5d mark II
Lens: Canon 85mm f1.2 L

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Comments

  • briandelionbriandelion Registered Users Posts: 512 Major grins
    edited October 24, 2010
    I love the way he emerges from the darkness and the brooding expression, but find the highlight on his forehead distracting. Maybe revealing that right eye slightly and toning down the highlight would help to heighten the expression.
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    It is about how that thing looks photographed." Garry Winogrand

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  • tomnovytomnovy Registered Users Posts: 1,103 SmugMug Employee
    edited October 24, 2010
    Thanks for the comment. I think you are right.
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  • NikolaiNikolai Registered Users Posts: 19,035 Major grins
    edited October 25, 2010
    Tom,
    Nice work!
    I concur with the the previous comment about the forehead.
    I also think there are too much of the "body" on the bottom/right. I think if you trim it or black it out the message would be much more clear...
    HTH
    Nikolai
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