New Senior shoot

jdorseydesign

Shot this two weekends ago, just getting around to posting it. It's only my second senior shoot. I like how everything turned out, although it should be noted, I did tell her not to wear busy patterns for the shoot and she showed up with this shirt on. :scratch

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#4


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Icebear

I like #3 & 4. The first does nothing for me (or her IMO.) The second would have been nice if she'd been engaging the camera. To me it looks like she's looking "away" from the camera, not looking "at" someone else. You're fortunate that blouse didn't fry the coating off your lens.

Nice skin tones too.

jdorseydesign

Icebear wrote: »

I like #3 & 4. The first does nothing for me (or her IMO.) The second would have been nice if she'd been engaging the camera. To me it looks like she's looking "away" from the camera, not looking "at" someone else. You're fortunate that blouse didn't fry the coating off your lens.

Nice skin tones too.

like this one? I did multiples of her in that location.

Icebear

Yup.

kris10jo

4 is my favorite of the bunch, and the lighting looks great. the high angle on #1 isn't working for me, either. did you try any shots from a lower angle?

VayCayMom

in #1 I really like the way her eyes look, but I don't like the way the rest of her looks. Maybe a slightly different pose, not so extreme, where it is cropped off at shoulders, and you are shooting from above , but not that high. And no arms up in the air. Yup, crazy shirt there!!

CASowers

#4 is terrific as is the one that you re-posted with her looking at the camera. Lighting is terrific in #4!
Nice shots.

Qarik

#3 is just not working for me. The pose is completley unflattering...it makes her look even larger.