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texasphotogtexasphotog Registered Users Posts: 2 Beginner grinner
edited November 4, 2010 in Go Figure
lavvegasoct2010045.jpg

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  • JeffroJeffro Registered Users Posts: 1,941 Major grins
    edited November 4, 2010
    There's really nothing in that photo that works for me. The cropping cuts off the breast on the right side of the frame, the crop at the neck area seems too high. The bright white on the right suddenly stops. The shot is out of focus, and there seems to be some motion blur going on.

    Too me it's the kind of shot I'd expect to see she took on a cellphone and sent to someone special.....if that's the case, it's fine. If not, it needs improvement.
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  • NikolaiNikolai Registered Users Posts: 19,035 Major grins
    edited November 4, 2010
    Model:
    * lovely features! thumb.gif
    Photographer:
    * image is blurry/OOF;
    * composition is boring;
    * framing is awkward;
    * lighting is bland and uninteresting;
    * BG "breaks" close to subject's neck, thus making an impression of very thick neck;
    * postprocessing is nonexisting;

    Total score: Model: 1, Photographer: zip ne_nau.gif
    "May the f/stop be with you!"
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