First time here with a portrait...

BBstringerBBstringer Registered Users Posts: 101 Major grins
edited November 7, 2010 in People
A friend who is a performance artist...great fun to shoot.

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...thanks for looking.

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  • heatherfeatherheatherfeather Registered Users Posts: 2,738 Major grins
    edited November 4, 2010
    The first three are fabulous. So much expression and I love the mood.

    The last looks like the focus is on her hat thingie and not her eyes. I would toss it.
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  • adbsgicomadbsgicom Registered Users Posts: 3,615 Major grins
    edited November 4, 2010
    I'd vote for 1 & 3. The hand in #2 is much brighter and feels like it isn't hers. Perhaps that's the goal and I'm not appreciating it, though... #4 is very nicely lit, but soft.
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  • QarikQarik Registered Users Posts: 4,959 Major grins
    edited November 4, 2010
    agree with heather also..I would straigthen #1.
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  • BBstringerBBstringer Registered Users Posts: 101 Major grins
    edited November 4, 2010
    More like this?

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    Thanks for the feedback....
    The piece with the hand before the face...at first I agreed with it being too prevalent in the shot...but as I looked at the subtlety of the light on her face behind the hand I really came to like it a lot...:D
  • YoungNomadYoungNomad Registered Users Posts: 57 Big grins
    edited November 6, 2010
    Number #2 is the standout - fantastic work!
  • BBstringerBBstringer Registered Users Posts: 101 Major grins
    edited November 7, 2010
    YoungNomad wrote: »
    Number #2 is the standout - fantastic work!

    TY YoungNomad I appreciate that.
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