Alisyn, first attempt (18+)

reyvee61

Artistic nude with window light:

Nikolai

reyvee61 wrote: »

Artistic nude with window light:

Congrats on your first break in!
Window light can be very rewarding, but in general can be very tricky, too.
I like it in general.
My primary nit is about your vantage point. As a general rule the lower the person is the higher you go. Full height - below the waist; upper torso - eve level; sitting - a head or two above, etc. Also, she doesn't look like a small girl, which is an additional incentive to go higher.
HTH
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Nikolai

reyvee61

Nikolai wrote: »

Congrats on your first break in!
Window light can be very rewarding, but in general can be very tricky, too.
I like it in general.
My primary nit is about your vantage point. As a general rule the lower the person is the higher you go. Full height - below the waist; upper torso - eve level; sitting - a head or two above, etc. Also, she doesn't look like a small girl, which is an additional incentive to go higher.
HTH
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Nikolai

Thanks for the tips Nik......
I'll take that into consideration on the next shoot...
I'll also be tinkering with rim lighting as well.
Much to learn :-)

briandelion

This is very nice! I love the simplicity. A good example of "less is more."

Macushla

I really like it, there is something sweet or shy about it.

kdog

I like the light. Agree with Nik that the vantage point could have been higher. The pose is seems too demure, almost self-conscious.