I would say it's soft, meaning not real sharp. Also, I don't like the position of her eyes. There is just too much white of the eye showing. Lastly, it looks like a lamp shade in the back ground. I'm not diggin that either. It's distracting. It looks like you got the exposure pretty good though.
Thanks Erbeman, I'm not sure what to do about the sharpness, LR is showing her eyelashes tack sharp on my monitor..............might be the compression. ??
As far as the distractions............
Have a boo at this pose, I would appreciate C+C on pose, lighting, the whole 9 yards.
Thanks,
Brewster
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As far as the distractions............
Have a boo at this pose, I would appreciate C+C on pose, lighting, the whole 9 yards.
Thanks,
Brewster
Go to the 'share' tab and select 'get links' and select a size (XL for portrait works well) and embed that between img and /img pragmas (meaning between []'s).
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