#64 -- The Ninth Hour

ghinsonghinson Registered Users Posts: 933 Major grins
edited November 20, 2010 in The Dgrin Challenges
Tell me...

Does this tell a story?

Does it fit the frame rule?

Thanks.

The Ninth Hour
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  • SeascapeSSeascapeS Registered Users Posts: 814 Major grins
    edited November 18, 2010
    I think it is a great idea, but some of the shots are lacking a bit. #3 and #9 are the same. Not too crazy about the crops in some of them, namely #4, #5 and #7. Work on that a bit and you've got a beautiful thing going!

    I don't get the story, but then I'm having a thick day.
    SandiZ
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  • kdotaylorkdotaylor Registered Users Posts: 1,280 Major grins
    edited November 18, 2010
    To be honest, Greg, I don't like the crops on most of them...those are some unattractive baby parts! I like the idea, just find the cuter parts of the baby.
    Kate
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    "You cannot depend on your eyes when your imagination is out of focus." Mark Twain
  • ghinsonghinson Registered Users Posts: 933 Major grins
    edited November 18, 2010
    Scrapping this one. Thanks. But, keep in mind, at nine hours old, there's no such thing as a cute baby, except your own.
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  • dniednie Users Awaiting Email Confirmation Posts: 1,351 Major grins
    edited November 18, 2010
    ghinson wrote: »
    Scrapping this one. Thanks. But, keep in mind, at nine hours old, there's no such thing as a cute baby, except your own.

    That is so very true! But I still think that is a cute one. I like some of the shots better than others though.
    Donna

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  • SeascapeSSeascapeS Registered Users Posts: 814 Major grins
    edited November 18, 2010
    #8 is adorable!
    SandiZ
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  • travelwaystravelways Registered Users Posts: 7,854 Major grins
    edited November 18, 2010
    Oh-hooo - finally! :)

    The idea is fantastic, and even if they are not "hollywood" cute this is real and it's how it is - I personally love it!

    Maybe some instances can be more story telling, but I'm not sure what exactly they would be... well, if they are not
    "cute" maybe the instances can tell a story scientifically point of view - I don't know if what I'm saying makes sense,
    but I can try again tomorrow morning.

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  • richterslrichtersl Registered Users Posts: 3,322 Major grins
    edited November 19, 2010
    It's very sweet. But I find the second image a distraction because I've no idea what it is you photographed for that one.
    Linda

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  • dniednie Users Awaiting Email Confirmation Posts: 1,351 Major grins
    edited November 19, 2010
    If I am seeing it right, that's a little baby knee.
    Donna

    My SmugMug
  • lizzard_nyclizzard_nyc Registered Users Posts: 4,056 Major grins
    edited November 19, 2010
    I like the unconventional crops. I really do.
    As was suggested, maybe swap out one of the two near to identical foot shots and the center one looks a little funny.
    But I vote for the crops you have and the bits you've shown.

    I am completely enamored with these--don't you dare scrap it.
    Liz A.
    _________
  • ghinsonghinson Registered Users Posts: 933 Major grins
    edited November 19, 2010
    OK. I'll keep working it. So happens, I'm expecting another delivery tonight. So there might be another willing model to shoot tomorrow!
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  • kdotaylorkdotaylor Registered Users Posts: 1,280 Major grins
    edited November 19, 2010
    richtersl wrote: »
    It's very sweet. But I find the second image a distraction because I've no idea what it is you photographed for that one.

    Yes, that's the one that I saw first and that bothers me the most...looked at first glance like an amputated limb
    Kate
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    "You cannot depend on your eyes when your imagination is out of focus." Mark Twain
  • lkbartlkbart Registered Users Posts: 1,912 Major grins
    edited November 20, 2010
    15524779-Ti.gif - Maybe more partial face shots - draw the viewer in with the eyes - even if they are shut :) Love the idea!
    ~Lillian~
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  • rteest42rteest42 Registered Users Posts: 540 Major grins
    edited November 20, 2010
    LOVE the idea... but maybe different baby parts? Toes, definitely (my FAVE part of a baby...) ears/profile, fingers, mouth/chin...the very top of the head and the knee don't work for me...the processing is great, though...maybe if its a boy, do in monotone blue?
    ...Trish

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