#64 Entry C&C

travissawyer

Hello everyone, this is my first time really entering into a contest. Was just wondering if I could get some feed back. Please be nice :bow lol. I look forward to seeing everyone's entries! I have been watching the contests at a distance for a while now and I really enjoy all of your photography. Hopefully I will be more active here

good luck everyone!

WhatSheSaw

Of the current set of entries, this is one of my top faves! Well done.

The individual photos are cool, well lit, and well converted. I like that the pattern in the photos is restated in position #9.

If I were to replace any, it would be the one in position #6. I realize that it is an empty space and that you are probably trying to mimic the lines on the paper in the last one, but I am left wondering what it is a photo of. And the top half is a bit dark. Maybe replace it with a section of the lighter gun barrel from #2? Or perhaps a pattern that mimics the whole tic-tac-toe grid.

Oh - and welcome! I am always happy to see new participants. Especially ones that challenge me to raise my game.

travissawyer

Thanks for the input! #6 is actually 2 swords. I will have to play with that one a bit. That was a tricky one, wasn't sure what to put I just wanted to try and mimic the lines. I'm going to try something that mimics a tic-tac-toe grid I think. Ill post it for more input

travissawyer

This any better?

travissawyer

or this one?

WhatSheSaw

travissawyer wrote: »

or this one?

I think this one. It is more blank than the other and mimics the lines on the paper better. I wish it were a bit sharper. Either that or it should be completely blurry.

kdotaylor

WhatSheSaw wrote: »

I think this one. It is more blank than the other and mimics the lines on the paper better. I wish it were a bit sharper. Either that or it should be completely blurry.

I really like this one best, too.