These are nice photographs of an event but not really something to critique. If you consider these professional portraits then there are items to mention. However they are more memories of an event.
Hm Let me try. I love candid shots.
First off, they are all superb photographs. Not much to nag about.
I would crop the shoulder of the person in the first picture. It distracts. Turn it into a tighter cropped vertical. Lovely expressions!!!
The second one looks superb. I would prefer a bit more background blur, especially on the branch that seems to grab her head. You could try Topaz Remask (for selecting the hair and such) and then use photoshop lens distortion blur to make the background look more out of focus.
Third one is wonderful. I really like it.
Last one is also very well done, nothing to yap about.
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These faires are great opportunities for photogs, I attend several here in California.
Nice color rendition and you managed the brightness of the sun well.....
Love the feel of the third one
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First off, they are all superb photographs. Not much to nag about.
I would crop the shoulder of the person in the first picture. It distracts. Turn it into a tighter cropped vertical. Lovely expressions!!!
The second one looks superb. I would prefer a bit more background blur, especially on the branch that seems to grab her head. You could try Topaz Remask (for selecting the hair and such) and then use photoshop lens distortion blur to make the background look more out of focus.
Third one is wonderful. I really like it.
Last one is also very well done, nothing to yap about.
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I like shooting pics of people but not I don't do portraits. My favorites are when the subject doesn't even know their being photographed.