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rdallandrdalland Registered Users Posts: 150 Major grins
edited December 7, 2010 in Street and Documentary
1118298329_cL7Xm-XL.jpg

thanks for looking, c&c appreciated

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  • RichardRichard Administrators, Vanilla Admin Posts: 19,961 moderator
    edited December 7, 2010
    Terrific capture, but the conversion could use some pop.
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  • rdallandrdalland Registered Users Posts: 150 Major grins
    edited December 7, 2010
    Richard wrote: »
    but the conversion could use some pop.

    Agreed, thank you.

    1118339013_DTn7e-XL.jpg

    Better? Moving in the right direction?
  • RichardRichard Administrators, Vanilla Admin Posts: 19,961 moderator
    edited December 7, 2010
    digitalfarmer wrote: »
    Better? Moving in the right direction?
    nod.gif If it were mine, I'd probably push it even further, but that's a matter of taste. Great image.
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  • billseyebillseye Registered Users Posts: 847 Major grins
    edited December 7, 2010
    I like the processing revision. Gotta say that the whole composition and story is terrific. Definitely made me look... and look again!
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  • Mike JMike J Registered Users Posts: 1,029 Major grins
    edited December 7, 2010
    Nice capture and story. Definitely like the 2nd revision better. Great image!clap.gif
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  • E ColbyE Colby Registered Users Posts: 68 Big grins
    edited December 7, 2010
    Made me thirsty. Like your revision. Great capture.
    Cheers,
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