I'm seeing a strange color cast in your images and lot of color bleed from something...
On the topic of lighting it looks artificial and unflattering. In this instance a flash bounced in the ceiling would have given you a more natural and pleasing lighting effect. A lot of times photographers try something just to try it without thinking about the scene they are shooting. Where is the light coming from and why? In an image inside the house you'd think overhead lights or window lighting. This almost resembles on camera flash with some bounce from the sides. Approach you shots from a blank slate and build it up.
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On the topic of lighting it looks artificial and unflattering. In this instance a flash bounced in the ceiling would have given you a more natural and pleasing lighting effect. A lot of times photographers try something just to try it without thinking about the scene they are shooting. Where is the light coming from and why? In an image inside the house you'd think overhead lights or window lighting. This almost resembles on camera flash with some bounce from the sides. Approach you shots from a blank slate and build it up.
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