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#65 - Flow - final try

JennJenn Registered Users Posts: 1,009 Major grins
edited December 14, 2010 in The Dgrin Challenges
This is my final attempt:

All Seeing Eyes
P1030860bubblesInmotion1.jpg
Jenn (from Oklahoma)
Panasonic Lumix 10x DMC-TZ3 :photo
Leica Mega O.I.S./28mm WIDE :smile6

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    WhatSheSawWhatSheSaw Registered Users Posts: 2,221 Major grins
    edited December 13, 2010
    This is interesting, but it lacks a bit in sharpness. I think your bubbles in the tank are delightful.

    It is wonderful to see how hard you are working these themes. thumb.gif
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    JennJenn Registered Users Posts: 1,009 Major grins
    edited December 13, 2010
    WhatSheSaw wrote: »
    This is interesting, but it lacks a bit in sharpness. I think your bubbles in the tank are delightful.

    It is wonderful to see how hard you are working these themes. thumb.gif

    The bubbles are moving .. popping and making new bubbles constantly .. that was the sharpest image I could get without it being over-sharpened and obvious, but here it goes.. is this better?
    P1030860bubblesInmotion2.jpg
    Jenn (from Oklahoma)
    Panasonic Lumix 10x DMC-TZ3 :photo
    Leica Mega O.I.S./28mm WIDE :smile6
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    slpollettslpollett Registered Users Posts: 1,194 Major grins
    edited December 13, 2010
    I like your other shot with the tank bubbles better than this one.

    Sherry
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    SeascapeSSeascapeS Registered Users Posts: 814 Major grins
    edited December 13, 2010
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    SandiZ
    If I could tell the story in words, I wouldn't need to lug around a camera. ~Lewis Hine
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    JennJenn Registered Users Posts: 1,009 Major grins
    edited December 13, 2010
    slpollett wrote: »
    I like your other shot with the tank bubbles better than this one.

    Sherry

    Which one?? Laughing.gif I posted 4 different tank images.
    Jenn (from Oklahoma)
    Panasonic Lumix 10x DMC-TZ3 :photo
    Leica Mega O.I.S./28mm WIDE :smile6
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    SeascapeSSeascapeS Registered Users Posts: 814 Major grins
    edited December 13, 2010
    #3
    SandiZ
    If I could tell the story in words, I wouldn't need to lug around a camera. ~Lewis Hine
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    JennJenn Registered Users Posts: 1,009 Major grins
    edited December 13, 2010
    SeascapeS wrote: »
    #3

    This one?

    P1030939-aquariumC.jpg
    Jenn (from Oklahoma)
    Panasonic Lumix 10x DMC-TZ3 :photo
    Leica Mega O.I.S./28mm WIDE :smile6
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    WhatSheSawWhatSheSaw Registered Users Posts: 2,221 Major grins
    edited December 13, 2010
    Jenn wrote: »
    This one?

    P1030939-aquariumC.jpg

    I liked the lighting in #3 in your original thread better.
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    JennJenn Registered Users Posts: 1,009 Major grins
    edited December 13, 2010
    WhatSheSaw wrote: »
    I liked the lighting in #3 in your original thread better.

    I can't find one that I labeled #3 <blush> <img src="https://us.v-cdn.net/6029383/emoji/headscratch.gif&quot; border="0" alt="" >
    Jenn (from Oklahoma)
    Panasonic Lumix 10x DMC-TZ3 :photo
    Leica Mega O.I.S./28mm WIDE :smile6
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    WhatSheSawWhatSheSaw Registered Users Posts: 2,221 Major grins
    edited December 13, 2010
    Jenn wrote: »
    I can't find one that I labeled #3 <BLUSH><img src="https://us.v-cdn.net/6029383/emoji/headscratch.gif&quot; border="0" alt="" >

    It is in the 5th entry in this thread - the square crop.
    http://www.dgrin.com/showthread.php?t=185515
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    JennJenn Registered Users Posts: 1,009 Major grins
    edited December 13, 2010
    WhatSheSaw wrote: »
    It is in the 5th entry in this thread - the square crop.
    http://www.dgrin.com/showthread.php?t=185515

    ah .. this one?:

    P1030959-bubbles1.jpg
    Jenn (from Oklahoma)
    Panasonic Lumix 10x DMC-TZ3 :photo
    Leica Mega O.I.S./28mm WIDE :smile6
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    WhatSheSawWhatSheSaw Registered Users Posts: 2,221 Major grins
    edited December 13, 2010
    Not the one I was thinking of. It was the first one you posted - your 3rd try of it where you had adjusted the lighting and cropped it square.

    I like this one, too.
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    SeascapeSSeascapeS Registered Users Posts: 814 Major grins
    edited December 13, 2010
    The one with the plants on each side.
    SandiZ
    If I could tell the story in words, I wouldn't need to lug around a camera. ~Lewis Hine
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    JennJenn Registered Users Posts: 1,009 Major grins
    edited December 13, 2010
    WhatSheSaw wrote: »
    Not the one I was thinking of. It was the first one you posted - your 3rd try of it where you had adjusted the lighting and cropped it square.

    I like this one, too.
    SeascapeS wrote: »
    The one with the plants on each side.

    ahh oh well ... I changed my entry to this one I posted because I thought that was the one you were referring to. Too late to change it again, tho. It's not like any of my pics are going to win anyway ... so I guess it doesn't matter which one I enter. :)
    Jenn (from Oklahoma)
    Panasonic Lumix 10x DMC-TZ3 :photo
    Leica Mega O.I.S./28mm WIDE :smile6
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    WhatSheSawWhatSheSaw Registered Users Posts: 2,221 Major grins
    edited December 13, 2010
    Jenn wrote: »
    ahh oh well ... I changed my entry to this one I posted because I thought that was the one you were referring to. Too late to change it again, tho. It's not like any of my pics are going to win anyway ... so I guess it doesn't matter which one I enter. :)

    You are selling yourself short. Your photos keep getting better.
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    JennJenn Registered Users Posts: 1,009 Major grins
    edited December 13, 2010
    WhatSheSaw wrote: »
    You are selling yourself short. Your photos keep getting better.

    thanks! :) I can't really tell if I am or not. I'm not even sure what I'm doing right. haha
    Jenn (from Oklahoma)
    Panasonic Lumix 10x DMC-TZ3 :photo
    Leica Mega O.I.S./28mm WIDE :smile6
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    WhatSheSawWhatSheSaw Registered Users Posts: 2,221 Major grins
    edited December 14, 2010
    Jenn wrote: »
    I'm not even sure what I'm doing right. haha

    :D Sometimes I feel that way, too. It is the problem with a subjective art. With practice, I am getting better at critiquing my own photos, but I am still sometimes surprised by a reaction I get from someone. A photo I think is great will get little reaction or one that I think is average wil get raves.
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    SeascapeSSeascapeS Registered Users Posts: 814 Major grins
    edited December 14, 2010
    Jenn - you are getting better. It takes time.

    I thought the one you didn't enter (#3) was good. It certainly said "flow". The one you did enter was good, but didn't hit the theme for me as much as the other one. I noticed that this time, you went for simple and appealing instead of cluttered. That was a huge step in the right direction. You're also getting better at lighting.

    Remember, your goal is improvement, not winning. Winning is just the cherry on the icing on the cake. If you look at it that way, you've already won.
    SandiZ
    If I could tell the story in words, I wouldn't need to lug around a camera. ~Lewis Hine
    http://sandizphotos-seascapes.smugmug.com/
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    JennJenn Registered Users Posts: 1,009 Major grins
    edited December 14, 2010
    SeascapeS wrote: »
    Jenn - you are getting better. It takes time.

    I thought the one you didn't enter (#3) was good. It certainly said "flow". The one you did enter was good, but didn't hit the theme for me as much as the other one. I noticed that this time, you went for simple and appealing instead of cluttered. That was a huge step in the right direction. You're also getting better at lighting.

    Remember, your goal is improvement, not winning. Winning is just the cherry on the icing on the cake. If you look at it that way, you've already won.
    I went back to the first thread and looked for one I put a #3 on and wasn't sure which one you meant because I didn't name one #3 ...

    How is my lighting getting better? Not so many shadows?

    edit - I JUST found the one I put as #3 .. rats!!! sorry...my bad!
    Jenn (from Oklahoma)
    Panasonic Lumix 10x DMC-TZ3 :photo
    Leica Mega O.I.S./28mm WIDE :smile6
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    SeascapeSSeascapeS Registered Users Posts: 814 Major grins
    edited December 14, 2010
    You're finding a balance with the light. Not to dark, less harsh shadows, not too bright.....
    SandiZ
    If I could tell the story in words, I wouldn't need to lug around a camera. ~Lewis Hine
    http://sandizphotos-seascapes.smugmug.com/
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