2 guys at the carnival.

streetpete

Hi all, I'm new to street shooting and was pointed this way from the Olympus E systems group on flickr by Lizzard_NYC, so you can blame her for the terrible images unleashed on you. I'm not sure if I was supposed to do anything else before posting here.

I took this one and would appreciate any C&C. I like it in black and white but the colour version totally works and is real nice



Thanks.

M38A1

First off - WELCOME!

I like the capture, great tonal range and subject content.

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Richard

Welcome to Dgrin . The juxtaposition makes this a fun shot and as Scott mentioned, the conversion is good. I'm not too sure about the empty bench at the right. I don't think you need all the figures to make the shot work and the stuff at the top is a little distracting, so you might want to try a tighter crop.

streetpete

Thanks for the feedback. I see what you are saying about the crop. I did crop it a little bit, just to even up the space either side of the figures. I'll play about with the cropping and see what it looks like.