#67 Glass--feedback please?

kdotaylorkdotaylor Registered Users Posts: 1,280 Major grins
edited January 2, 2011 in The Dgrin Challenges
Is anyone willing to give me some feedback on this image? Thanks!
1142918665_rmrDG-L.jpg
Kate
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"You cannot depend on your eyes when your imagination is out of focus." Mark Twain

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  • slflashslflash Registered Users Posts: 186 Major grins
    edited December 31, 2010
    feedback
    Kate,
    I like the shot, but I think that it would be a stronger image if it were shot vertically. Were you able to get any more shots of it with the cross (stained glass) in the image?

    If so please post.
  • DsrtVWDsrtVW Registered Users Posts: 1,991 Major grins
    edited December 31, 2010
    slflash wrote: »
    Kate,
    I like the shot, but I think that it would be a stronger image if it were shot vertically. Were you able to get any more shots of it with the cross (stained glass) in the image?

    If so please post.


    I agree. I like where it is going.
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  • kwickerskwickers Registered Users Posts: 310 Major grins
    edited January 1, 2011
    The image is strong enough the way I see it the glass is not the first thing that comes to mind. May a larger crop?
    Photos.KeithWickersham.com
  • FrochFroch Registered Users Posts: 571 Major grins
    edited January 1, 2011
    Wonderful concept!
  • kdotaylorkdotaylor Registered Users Posts: 1,280 Major grins
    edited January 1, 2011
    I do have a similar one, is this better?
    1142918181_gaVrx-L.jpg

    I have four others, as well, totally different idea. What about these?
    #1
    1143772522_pNCcd-L.jpg

    #2
    1143772607_4YDin-L.jpg

    #3
    1143772897_GFurQ-L.jpg

    #4
    1143773311_mzP6u-L.jpg
    Kate
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    "You cannot depend on your eyes when your imagination is out of focus." Mark Twain
  • SeascapeSSeascapeS Registered Users Posts: 814 Major grins
    edited January 1, 2011
    I actually like the first one better. The second attempt is good also, maybe a bit of a crop on the right side to take out the orange glow and the appearance of the hunchback.
    SandiZ
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  • WhatSheSawWhatSheSaw Registered Users Posts: 2,221 Major grins
    edited January 1, 2011
    I agree with Seascapes.

    The glassware ones are well executed, but the glass alone is not enough to carry the picture.
  • kwickerskwickers Registered Users Posts: 310 Major grins
    edited January 2, 2011
    I do like the image with more of the stained glass. It says glass and is a good strong image.
    Photos.KeithWickersham.com
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