Our son c&c please

jleblancjleblanc Registered Users Posts: 6 Beginner grinner
edited January 3, 2011 in People
Hello all! im new to the site. just thought id drop a couple of photos of our son, Riley, that i took a couple of days ago. shot with my d60 and 55-200mm vr and cleaned up in lr3. thanks!

1. DSC_6998.jpg

2. DSC_7000.jpg

Comments

  • TravelTravel Registered Users Posts: 276 Major grins
    edited January 2, 2011
    Picture #1 is a good 2/3s facial angle which means the tip of the nose is inside the cheek and you see skin on the far side of the far eye. You did good! How could you make this print better? #1 darken the corners. #2 the far side of him needs to be darken a bit. #3 retouch around his mouth. #4 Crop in we need his whole arm or none. You did Good!
  • jleblancjleblanc Registered Users Posts: 6 Beginner grinner
    edited January 3, 2011
    thank you sir!
  • QarikQarik Registered Users Posts: 4,959 Major grins
    edited January 3, 2011
    hi, welcome. I would take down the saturation n #1 a LOT. The processing in #2 is killing the shot.
    D700, D600
    14-24 24-70 70-200mm (vr2)
    85 and 50 1.4
    45 PC and sb910 x2
    http://www.danielkimphotography.com
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