More MS Girls Basketball - C&C please

roletterolette Registered Users Posts: 223 Major grins
edited January 10, 2011 in Sports
Based on feedback from Gary and John from my last post, I shot the next couple of games with my 70-200 and worked on shooting tighter.

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C&C appreciated.

Thanks,
Jay

Comments

  • jheftijhefti Registered Users Posts: 734 Major grins
    edited January 10, 2011
    Very nice composition, with good facial exposure and aerial timing. I can tell that the venue is challenging because the walls are very bright and effectively backlight the subjects. I might suggest bringing up the exposure a smidge, so that the players are properly exposed, at the risking of over-exposing the background.
  • JimKarczewskiJimKarczewski Registered Users Posts: 969 Major grins
    edited January 10, 2011
    Only thing I don't like is the weird crops, like #6. Crop with a more normal aspect ratio??
  • roletterolette Registered Users Posts: 223 Major grins
    edited January 10, 2011
    jhefti wrote: »
    Very nice composition, with good facial exposure and aerial timing. I can tell that the venue is challenging because the walls are very bright and effectively backlight the subjects. I might suggest bringing up the exposure a smidge, so that the players are properly exposed, at the risking of over-exposing the background.

    You are definitely right about the venue. Sadly, this is one of the better gyms I get to shoot at right now. The one I shot last week was much worse, ISO 10,000 but severe spotlighting and "holes" in the light + really bad color cycling. Haven't processed those yet because I'm dreading it...

    Appreciate the feedback. I'll keep an eye on face exposures.

    Jay
  • roletterolette Registered Users Posts: 223 Major grins
    edited January 10, 2011
    Only thing I don't like is the weird crops, like #6. Crop with a more normal aspect ratio??

    I used to stick with normal print aspect ratios, but based on comments I've seen on various boards, a lot of folks don't bother with that anymore - just depends on who/what you are shooting for. For web/media, it doesn't seem to matter much, so I've loosened up on that.

    That said, I probably pushed it too far on #6 and should have canned that one.

    Thanks,
    Jay
  • jheftijhefti Registered Users Posts: 734 Major grins
    edited January 10, 2011
    rolette wrote: »
    I used to stick with normal print aspect ratios, but based on comments I've seen on various boards, a lot of folks don't bother with that anymore - just depends on who/what you are shooting for. For web/media, it doesn't seem to matter much, so I've loosened up on that.

    That said, I probably pushed it too far on #6 and should have canned that one.

    Thanks,
    Jay
    Hey Rolette, cropping seems to be a very personal matter. Aside from the practicalities of framing a print, you should really go with what works for your eye. I am all into context of a shot, which often means capturing interesting background or some other aspect of the picture that is not the principal subject, but it some ways accentuates something about the subject.

    Here are a couple of examples that often get criticized for not being cropped correctly. In the first shot, I love the sense of isolation that the black and green background give to the two soccer players. A tighter crop is nice, but I think the unique moment between the two players is lost.

    In the second shot, the surfer is not doing anything particularly spectacular, but the breaking wave behind makes him a far more interesting subject in my opinion.
  • jheftijhefti Registered Users Posts: 734 Major grins
    edited January 10, 2011
    Sorry...here is the other pic...
  • jheftijhefti Registered Users Posts: 734 Major grins
    edited January 10, 2011
    rolette wrote: »
    You are definitely right about the venue. Sadly, this is one of the better gyms I get to shoot at right now. The one I shot last week was much worse, ISO 10,000 but severe spotlighting and "holes" in the light + really bad color cycling. Haven't processed those yet because I'm dreading it...

    Appreciate the feedback. I'll keep an eye on face exposures.

    Jay

    Unfortunately, gyms are notoriously difficult to shoot in. I feel for you.
  • NihilationNihilation Registered Users Posts: 75 Big grins
    edited January 10, 2011
    #6 looks like a foul and a half.
  • roletterolette Registered Users Posts: 223 Major grins
    edited January 10, 2011
    Nihilation wrote: »
    #6 looks like a foul and a half.

    Ninja death grips aren't legal in MS basketball? rolleyes1.gif
  • roletterolette Registered Users Posts: 223 Major grins
    edited January 10, 2011
    jhefti wrote: »
    Sorry...here is the other pic...

    I like that crop on the surfing picture!
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