DSS#67....second try, looking for feedback please

ic4uic4u Registered Users Posts: 1,455 Major grins
edited January 9, 2011 in The Dgrin Challenges
I'm not sure if this is going to say glass to anyone, but I kinda like the way it turned out,
wondering what anyone else thinks, or is my head cold just really getting the best of me on this theme:huh

1. Inside Looking Out
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Karin


"Dance like no one is watching. Sing like no one is listening. Love like you've never been hurt and live like it's heaven on Earth." — Mark Twain

Comments

  • PattiPatti Registered Users Posts: 1,576 Major grins
    edited January 8, 2011
    I really like this one. I'd have a bit more of her finger tips pressed on the glass to give more indication of looking through the glass. The lighting could be a smidge brighter to sharpen her up. It looks just a teeny bit flat to me.
    The use of a camera is similar to that of a knife. You can use it to peel potatoes, or carve a flute. ~ E. Kahlmeyer
    ... I'm still peeling potatoes.

    patti hinton photography
  • ic4uic4u Registered Users Posts: 1,455 Major grins
    edited January 8, 2011
    Patti wrote: »
    I really like this one. I'd have a bit more of her finger tips pressed on the glass to give more indication of looking through the glass. The lighting could be a smidge brighter to sharpen her up. It looks just a teeny bit flat to me.

    Thanks so much for the feedback Patti, you are very right, it does look flat. I can try to reshoot, but I just really like the expression and her eyes, and doubt I could get that again. I did play some more in post to sharpen and brighten, plus try to get the fingers more pressed, how does this one look?

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    Karin


    "Dance like no one is watching. Sing like no one is listening. Love like you've never been hurt and live like it's heaven on Earth." — Mark Twain
  • kdotaylorkdotaylor Registered Users Posts: 1,280 Major grins
    edited January 8, 2011
    I really like this one, too. If there's any way to reshoot, try to get her nose pressed up against the glass. If not, leave it alone--it does say glass to me, and I love her expression.
    Kate
    www.katetaylor.smugmug.com
    "You cannot depend on your eyes when your imagination is out of focus." Mark Twain
  • PattiPatti Registered Users Posts: 1,576 Major grins
    edited January 8, 2011
    No I like rhe original better. The fingertips look over processed now. Can you brighten just her eye a smidge?
    The use of a camera is similar to that of a knife. You can use it to peel potatoes, or carve a flute. ~ E. Kahlmeyer
    ... I'm still peeling potatoes.

    patti hinton photography
  • lizzard_nyclizzard_nyc Registered Users Posts: 4,056 Major grins
    edited January 8, 2011
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    love the subtle approach here.
    Liz A.
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  • ic4uic4u Registered Users Posts: 1,455 Major grins
    edited January 8, 2011
    Patti wrote: »
    No I like rhe original better. The fingertips look over processed now. Can you brighten just her eye a smidge?

    I will work on it some more, thanks for your suggestions!
    lizzard_nyc wrote: »
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    love the subtle approach here.

    Thanks Liziloveyou.gif
    Karin


    "Dance like no one is watching. Sing like no one is listening. Love like you've never been hurt and live like it's heaven on Earth." — Mark Twain
  • oldtown_dreameroldtown_dreamer Registered Users Posts: 177 Major grins
    edited January 9, 2011
    i like the original better. it does say glass, subtly, but it does. and she's just precious.
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  • ic4uic4u Registered Users Posts: 1,455 Major grins
    edited January 9, 2011
    oldtown_dreamer wrote: »
    i like the original better. it does say glass, subtly, but it does. and she's just precious.

    Thanks Diana, I made some slight adjustments on the first one and have entered it, I appreciate your commentsiloveyou.gif
    Karin


    "Dance like no one is watching. Sing like no one is listening. Love like you've never been hurt and live like it's heaven on Earth." — Mark Twain
  • tinamarie52tinamarie52 Registered Users Posts: 954 Major grins
    edited January 9, 2011
    I like the original. It absolutely says glass.

    Chris
    http://chrisadamczyk.smugmug.com

    When you come to a door... walk through it.
    If it's locked... find an open window.
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