Play in the Park (comments and critiques welcome and loved)

SystemSystem Registered Users Posts: 8,186 moderator
edited September 18, 2005 in People
my friend lyla and i went to play in the park.it was hot and very bright, but i did my best and actually like how the sun looks in these. here's what i came up with. hope you like them.


bubbles.jpg

bubbles2.jpg

junglegym.jpg

thanks so much for looking and as usual, comments and critiques are always welcome and encouraged.

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  • ScottMcLeodScottMcLeod Registered Users Posts: 753 Major grins
    edited September 18, 2005
    #1 is my fave

    #2 would have worked better maybe as a horizontal shot, showing a longer bubble trail?

    #3 needs... a slight crop/composition adjustment... not sure what. Love the effect with the sun breaking through/reflecting on her hair though.
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  • SystemSystem Registered Users Posts: 8,186 moderator
    edited September 18, 2005
    yea number 1 is my favorite too. thanks so much for your helpful comments.


    #1 is my fave

    #2 would have worked better maybe as a horizontal shot, showing a longer bubble trail?

    #3 needs... a slight crop/composition adjustment... not sure what. Love the effect with the sun breaking through/reflecting on her hair though.
  • ian408ian408 Administrators Posts: 21,934 moderator
    edited September 18, 2005
    Number 1. That's the one.

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  • SystemSystem Registered Users Posts: 8,186 moderator
    edited September 18, 2005
    yea? i'm glad you like it!


    ian408 wrote:
    Number 1. That's the one.

    Ian
  • rahmonsterrahmonster Registered Users Posts: 1,376 Major grins
    edited September 18, 2005
    1 is lovely.
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  • SystemSystem Registered Users Posts: 8,186 moderator
    edited September 18, 2005
    thanks!


    rahmonster wrote:
    1 is lovely.
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