If I may say - good idea. It's just that the light is not that great to create the right interaction on the subject. I'd probably go back to this same spot and wait for that nice sun rays to illuminate the object again. I like the 2nd image better.
Sitting quietly, doing nothing. Spring comes and the grass grows by itself.
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