#68 - Chocolate Dominoes

peoorvendalpeoorvendal Registered Users Posts: 45 Big grins
edited January 24, 2011 in The Dgrin Challenges
Does this work? C&C please!

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  • ic4uic4u Registered Users Posts: 1,455 Major grins
    edited January 23, 2011
    peoorvendal wrote: »
    Does this work? C&C please!


    Nice angle, maybe a tighter crop though?
    Karin


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  • jbrown4849jbrown4849 Registered Users Posts: 26 Big grins
    edited January 24, 2011
    ic4u wrote: »
    Nice angle, maybe a tighter crop though?
    Yes, I agree. A tighter crop would really amp up the movement of the "dominoes." Love the idea you have going here. :ivar
  • peoorvendalpeoorvendal Registered Users Posts: 45 Big grins
    edited January 24, 2011
    Hmm, I was playing with a tighter crop, but it felt cramped to me. I want to keep the "choc" word and the hand. Are you suggesting cropping even closer?
  • lkbartlkbart Registered Users Posts: 1,912 Major grins
    edited January 24, 2011
    Great idea - really like the domino effect! I think with the angle of the shot, it's not obvious that it says "choc". My eye starts at the fingers & goes toward the chocolates. Maybe if you cropped it so it's a little straighter, you could keep all the elements and still have a tighter crop.
    ~Lillian~
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  • PattiPatti Registered Users Posts: 1,576 Major grins
    edited January 24, 2011
    Perhaps a lower angle would be more effective. I think the concept is great.
    The use of a camera is similar to that of a knife. You can use it to peel potatoes, or carve a flute. ~ E. Kahlmeyer
    ... I'm still peeling potatoes.

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