Light Warrior

jdryan3jdryan3 Registered Users Posts: 1,353 Major grins
edited February 24, 2011 in Street and Documentary
This link is to a posting that is NSFW, but not typical for the Go Figure forum. It was taken at night at an outdoor festival. This woman was walking across a park and this is the view I saw. It is posed only to the extent she stopped and I talked to her before taking the shot.

I think it is a little too dark but I have gotten opinions saying not by much. C&C welcome.
"Don't ask me what I think of you, I might not give the answer that you want me to. Oh well."
-Fleetwood Mac

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  • RichardRichard Administrators, Vanilla Admin Posts: 19,961 moderator
    edited February 24, 2011
    Something isn't working for me, but I'm not sure that it's the darkness. The composition seems off. Maybe that's because the bottom of the frame is too dark, but maybe it would be better to crop from the bottom and leave the brightness alone. Dunno.
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  • radhakradhak Registered Users Posts: 34 Big grins
    edited February 24, 2011
    That link takes me to a part of Dgrin where my password is not accepted. Is that some kind of a secure page?
  • RichardRichard Administrators, Vanilla Admin Posts: 19,961 moderator
    edited February 24, 2011
    radhak wrote: »
    That link takes me to a part of Dgrin where my password is not accepted. Is that some kind of a secure page?
    Yes, the Go Figure forum contains nudity and a password is required. The password is: optin
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  • jdryan3jdryan3 Registered Users Posts: 1,353 Major grins
    edited February 24, 2011
    Richard wrote: »
    Something isn't working for me, but I'm not sure that it's the darkness. The composition seems off. Maybe that's because the bottom of the frame is too dark, but maybe it would be better to crop from the bottom and leave the brightness alone. Dunno.

    Thanks Richard. I appreciate the feedback. Almost 400 views but yours is the only comment in either forum. I have other crops and versions, so I'll look to posting those. The shots are truly 'seize the moment' so I didn't have a lot of time to art direct rolleyes1.gif
    "Don't ask me what I think of you, I might not give the answer that you want me to. Oh well."
    -Fleetwood Mac
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