Glaring !

EiaEia Registered Users Posts: 3,627 Major grins
edited February 24, 2011 in Street and Documentary
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I thought her expression just in her eyes was intense!
Does it work?

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  • damonffdamonff Registered Users Posts: 1,894 Major grins
    edited February 21, 2011
    I'd like this more if the man's nose weren't cut off. Her eye is magical and it could be a great shot.
  • swifteyeswifteye Registered Users Posts: 156 Major grins
    edited February 21, 2011
    damonff wrote: »
    I'd like this more if the man's nose weren't cut off. Her eye is magical and it could be a great shot.

    "Cut his nose to spite his face." Sorry, I couldn't resist!
  • rainbowrainbow Registered Users Posts: 2,765 Major grins
    edited February 21, 2011
    I don't really get an intense look from her (lack of furrowed brow?). Looks like she just glanced at the camera as you snapped. His eye has a more intense look -- maybe it is just more in focus.
  • EiaEia Registered Users Posts: 3,627 Major grins
    edited February 22, 2011
    I do have one without the cropped nose. I thought it distracted the girl but will go back with another look. She was staring to see if I would take the picture. Thanks for suggestion.
  • bdcolenbdcolen Registered Users Posts: 3,804 Major grins
    edited February 22, 2011
    Eia wrote: »
    I do have one without the cropped nose. I thought it distracted the girl but will go back with another look. She was staring to see if I would take the picture. Thanks for suggestion.

    This has real potential. I'd either do what Damon suggested, and include the nose,mouth, on the guy. OR...Try a square, and crop the guy so we just have a bit of the side of his head, with no eye, nose mouth.
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  • EiaEia Registered Users Posts: 3,627 Major grins
    edited February 22, 2011
    1195769582_Wczev-L.jpg

    with his face...
    I have his whole body as well....?
  • damonffdamonff Registered Users Posts: 1,894 Major grins
    edited February 22, 2011
    I like this a lot more.
  • FlyingginaFlyinggina Registered Users Posts: 2,639 Major grins
    edited February 22, 2011
    You don't need a title. I like it with the nose.

    Interesting capture!

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  • EiaEia Registered Users Posts: 3,627 Major grins
    edited February 24, 2011
    damonff wrote: »
    I like this a lot more.

    Thanks for the suggestion! I like it better too!
    Flyinggina wrote: »
    You don't need a title. I like it with the nose.

    Interesting capture!

    Virginia

    Thanks for the comment! :)
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