Thanks for peeping guys, I appreciate the comments.
Melissa this is my first go with LR as I previously only used CNX2 but I'm loving the ease and power of LR3
Neil that little bit bothers me as well and I've tried different things (crops) but I wasn't happy with any them so I settled on this one.
I used the Nikon 85MM 1.4 for this at approx one meter distance
That's not a lens issue, but her pose. She raised her shoulder (blade) a little bit by turning her arm backwards and looking over her shoulder. It doesn't bother me at all.
I also like the crop (I might have even made it tighter ;-)
Love the dreamy expression you captured and your b&w conversion. I agree with earlier comment about the too tight cropping of the left side.
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Melissa this is my first go with LR as I previously only used CNX2 but I'm loving the ease and power of LR3
My only reservation is the disparity in size between the face and the shoulder, and I wonder what the lens was and how far from the S?
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I used the Nikon 85MM 1.4 for this at approx one meter distance
I also like the crop (I might have even made it tighter ;-)
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