[High School Rep]: Devan - C&C Wanted

sonny_c

Seventeen years ago my wife, Michelle, use to babysit this young lady (and her two older brothers) when Devan was just an infant. Now she is a junior at Klein Forest High School.

I just want to say one thing before you begin...it was WINDY! As you will see the hair was all over the place and clothing was being blown 'around'. We did our best and battled through it. How do you guys handle windy outdoor sessions?

All C&C is welcomed.




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Albert Dickson

I think they are splendid. I am not a fan of 3 and 5. It is a mouth open thing.
4 and 8 are exceptionally nice. I reall think 4 rocks. The back light and B&W work super here.
Albert

digidrone

Put me down on #4
I think these are very well done!

anonymouscuban

Sonny,

These are really good. I love 4 and 7. I don't know if this is a hobby of yours or if you did this and get paid, but I can tell you... this set is light years better than about 75% of the stuff I've seen produced by so-called pros that shoot seniors for a living. Just take a look on the net and you see what I mean. Seriously. Sure... there are some nits but very minor. You did a very good job and I'm sure she and her family will love them.

zoomer

7 and 8 and 9 look like they were shot by a different photographer...definitely a cut above the rest. The light and skin in those are very nice. 7 the pose makes her look like somebody yelled her name off set and she looked over, could be better.
4 I like but the light is to sharp and harsh from below, see the shadows on her neck and between her eyes, still a cool shot wuold have been better with softer light from below to soften those shadows.

The first group were shot without a flash modifier and you can tell from the harsh shadows, looks like she was having a good time, which is good.

6 had a lot of potential, love the setting and the processing, the pose not so much. Any thing with some personality or attitude would have been great in that spot.

9 also had a lot of potential, great spot, great light, the pose makes it look she is cold and wants to be done.

As presented I like 8 the best, don't love the background but still a nice photo, kind of a different crop with lots of appendages cut off...but I kind of like that effect. She looks very pretty in this shot.

Overall a solid effort. I am sure she will love the shots.
I like that you did not "pose" her so much which creates a stiff unatural subject, but when their position is not idea it is good to help them out a bit.

Looks like you handled the wind well, I just try to keep their face to the wind and normally not a big deal, I like a bit of wind.

I hope you take this critique as constructive in nature as is my intent per your request for CC.

Qarik

some good stuff, some REAL good stuff..I would throw a small vignette on 1,2,7 and 9 just to lead the eyes a bit.

Wachel

4, 6, 7, 8 WOO HOO! Great shots. I love the lighting in 4! Nice work.

sonny_c

Thank you everyone for taking time to look at my photos and providing feedback.

Qarik wrote: »

some good stuff, some REAL good stuff..I would throw a small vignette on 1,2,7 and 9 just to lead the eyes a bit.

Thanks for the suggestion. I'll have to try that.

zoomer wrote: »

7 and 8 and 9 look like they were shot by a different photographer...definitely a cut above the rest. The light and skin in those are very nice. 7 the pose makes her look like somebody yelled her name off set and she looked over, could be better.
4 I like but the light is to sharp and harsh from below, see the shadows on her neck and between her eyes, still a cool shot wuold have been better with softer light from below to soften those shadows.

The first group were shot without a flash modifier and you can tell from the harsh shadows, looks like she was having a good time, which is good.

6 had a lot of potential, love the setting and the processing, the pose not so much. Any thing with some personality or attitude would have been great in that spot.

9 also had a lot of potential, great spot, great light, the pose makes it look she is cold and wants to be done.

As presented I like 8 the best, don't love the background but still a nice photo, kind of a different crop with lots of appendages cut off...but I kind of like that effect. She looks very pretty in this shot.

Overall a solid effort. I am sure she will love the shots.
I like that you did not "pose" her so much which creates a stiff unatural subject, but when their position is not idea it is good to help them out a bit.

Looks like you handled the wind well, I just try to keep their face to the wind and normally not a big deal, I like a bit of wind.

I hope you take this critique as constructive in nature as is my intent per your request for CC.

Zoomer,

Thank you for breaking down each set of photos and providing ideas to make them better.

anonymouscuban wrote: »

Sonny,

These are really good. I love 4 and 7. I don't know if this is a hobby of yours or if you did this and get paid, but I can tell you... this set is light years better than about 75% of the stuff I've seen produced by so-called pros that shoot seniors for a living. Just take a look on the net and you see what I mean. Seriously. Sure... there are some nits but very minor. You did a very good job and I'm sure she and her family will love them.

Thank you Alex! We're not getting paid yet. We are in the process of building our portfolio with newborn and high school rep sessions.

wolf911

6, 7, and 8 I like best, nice work.

reyvee61

You did a great job and you made the wind work for you on many of these...
#7 is my fave...
When I shoot in the wind with portable lighting I always bring a helper
Bravo!

Hackbone

I really like 3-4 & 8. This is a nice representation of her. I expecially like how you kept the clothing in key with the background. (light clothing-light backgound, dark clothing-dark background). A major concern in competition. Do you have any studio shots of her?

Greg49

I'll keep my comments quick and simple....Holy crap, excellent work.

lilmomma

these are great! she will definitely be pleased!

zoomer

You don't need a portfolio. Use shot number 8 as your cover page and go make some money.
As stated previously your work is better than all the soccer moms that are out there making $100. a shoot and turning out *&^% that they think is gold.

You should be making money now, you are just a couple fixes away from turning out Really Great Work.

Be confident.

jdryan3

#8 is the best shot IMHO. I alos like #4 a lot but would crop the jeans out of the shot - keep only the sports jersey.