People in our Neighborhood...
I made some revisions to my picture from the challenge. Andy gave some constructive criticism, so I took it to heart and learned from it. I cropped the shot two different ways for better composition and changed the selective color to a more appropriate place. I think this draws the focus to the hands. Any comments?
The second one:
A new one, called Pedicure...
A third one... The Nail Salon
And the last one.... Pretty Toes
The girls insisted I take this one. They were so excited to show off their work. One foot belonged to a customer and the other was the foot of one of the Vietnamese girls. I'm going to order prints and bring them in to the salon. I think the girls will be thrilled.
Does anyone have any constructive criticism before I get prints? Can they be made better? Should I cut out the borders before ordering prints or leave them on? :dunno
The second one:
A new one, called Pedicure...
A third one... The Nail Salon
And the last one.... Pretty Toes
The girls insisted I take this one. They were so excited to show off their work. One foot belonged to a customer and the other was the foot of one of the Vietnamese girls. I'm going to order prints and bring them in to the salon. I think the girls will be thrilled.
Does anyone have any constructive criticism before I get prints? Can they be made better? Should I cut out the borders before ordering prints or leave them on? :dunno
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I like the horizontal first manicure better than the other crop. I love the change in where you put the color.
I really love the shot of the toes. Great picture of very good work.
I have no idea about framing. I seem to be kind of out of it in that area, I like frames online, don't know about in making a print. I have only ordered from Shutterfly last year and before, they have borders to play with, I often do put a white border on the picture.
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it's exciting and gratifying for me, to see folks that go back and try to improve. i like what you've done here, and also, you've made my day
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