Certainly fits as there is a phone in there. However, you can't see an awful lot of it, not that that matters I suppose.
The plant to the right corner is a little distracting. What I would suggest is having a closer look at the phone, it seems to be nice and shiney on the front, possible to catch a reflection of someone holding the receiver?
Or alternatively what would the shot have looked like from outside looking in the window. (I'm thinking rainy day, water on the window, a sad face resting against the glass holding a telephone, B&W.)
The phone looks interesting, especially in B&W, how about trying to capture someone using it whilst sat on the stool facing forward/sideways, therefore bringing the phone into the shot more.
Forgive the barrage of suggestions, had too much coffee this morning!
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The plant to the right corner is a little distracting. What I would suggest is having a closer look at the phone, it seems to be nice and shiney on the front, possible to catch a reflection of someone holding the receiver?
Or alternatively what would the shot have looked like from outside looking in the window. (I'm thinking rainy day, water on the window, a sad face resting against the glass holding a telephone, B&W.)
The phone looks interesting, especially in B&W, how about trying to capture someone using it whilst sat on the stool facing forward/sideways, therefore bringing the phone into the shot more.
Forgive the barrage of suggestions, had too much coffee this morning!