First time posting - C&C welcome!!

kaughtphotographykaughtphotography Registered Users Posts: 3 Beginner grinner
edited April 2, 2011 in People
Been a lurker for a while now! Here are a few from my first "human" shoot. Basically spent the afternoon with my younger cousin and got a few good ones, I think. Plenty of rookie mistakes, I am sure! Cutting off fingers, shoes etc and I have realized there is an issue with too many angles. Opinions are welcome and encouraged!
Thanks so much for checking them out!

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Comments

  • reyvee61reyvee61 Registered Users Posts: 1,877 Major grins
    edited April 2, 2011
    Good start...
    I'm a bit confused on the orientation of the first one though.
    I'll comment more constructively when I get home to my calibrated display
    Yo soy Reynaldo
  • SvennieSvennie Registered Users Posts: 181 Major grins
    edited April 2, 2011
    Lot's of creativity, which is very good!
    Overall: they lack contrast and seem soft. Softness can of course be a lens or camera issue.
    (please number the photos, that makes it easier to comment ;-)

    1) Nice pose & angle! I would try a different crop, though
    2+3) I like the pose, and the combo clothing+background. Don't like the tilt.
    4) Nice one!
    5) Such a shame you didn't get her hand in the shot! Otherwise very playful, fun shot
    6) Not sure about the tilt. First I liked it, then I didn't, now I do... makes you think, therefore a good photo ;-) I would definitely try this one in black and white!

    Your cousin did an excellent job!
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