Agata's Black Dress

BilsenBilsen Registered Users Posts: 2,143 Major grins
edited April 12, 2011 in People
A few more of this insanely gorgeous model. Click the first frame for her full gallery.

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Bilsen (the artist formerly known as John Galt NY)
Canon 600D; Canon 1D Mk2;
24-105 f4L IS; 70-200 f4L IS; 50mm 1.4; 28-75 f2.8; 55-250 IS; 580EX & (2) 430EX Flash,
Model Galleries: http://bilsen.zenfolio.com/
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  • [Deleted User][Deleted User] Major grins NorwayPosts: 0 Major grins
    edited April 11, 2011
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  • dogwooddogwood Registered Users Posts: 2,572 Major grins
    edited April 11, 2011
    Good looking model but your cross lighting is not doing her any favors. For example, the shadow on her face on the first image is a bit harsh. Try moving your model farther from the background (that will allow your rim light to rim light her without casting shadows on her face) and lower the power of your lights. Your kicker/rim light seems a little hot. Without seeing exif data, I'm guessing you were shooting at f/11 or f/16. Try f/5.6 -- that will help soften your shadows a bit and will also blur the background.
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  • IcebearIcebear Registered Users Posts: 4,015 Major grins
    edited April 11, 2011
    John, this is the first series you've put up where I thought you didn't do the model justice. I always look at your posts, 'cause I like your stuff. These (sorry m'amigo) don't rise to what I expect from you. I DO like the dress though! I prolly wouldn't have been able to concentrate on lighting either. mwink.gif
    John :
    Natural selection is responsible for every living thing that exists.
    D3s, D500, D5300, and way more glass than the wife knows about.
  • HackboneHackbone Registered Users Posts: 4,027 Major grins
    edited April 12, 2011
    I agree on the lighting on these but you've got some georgous ones on the site.
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  • zoomerzoomer Registered Users Posts: 3,688 Major grins
    edited April 12, 2011
    She is a very attractive model. The lighting in these shots has some issues...but still nice to look at.
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  • BilsenBilsen Registered Users Posts: 2,143 Major grins
    edited April 12, 2011
    Thanks guys.

    I actually didn't set up the lighting (although I don't claim I would have done better). I do agree that Agata is better looking than I gave her in this set.

    Pete, believe it or not, these were at f5.6. Your suggestion is good bt my execution -- not so much.

    Icebear - no need to apologize. I put everything up for C&C. That means y'all have to be free to tell me when I screw up.

    To make up for the above, how about I show Agata in a somewhat better lightmwink.gif

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    Bilsen (the artist formerly known as John Galt NY)
    Canon 600D; Canon 1D Mk2;
    24-105 f4L IS; 70-200 f4L IS; 50mm 1.4; 28-75 f2.8; 55-250 IS; 580EX & (2) 430EX Flash,
    Model Galleries: http://bilsen.zenfolio.com/
    Everything Else: www.pbase.com/bilsen
  • IcebearIcebear Registered Users Posts: 4,015 Major grins
    edited April 12, 2011
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    John :
    Natural selection is responsible for every living thing that exists.
    D3s, D500, D5300, and way more glass than the wife knows about.
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