Maria, Maria.

ShutterStaciShutterStaci Registered Users Posts: 43 Big grins
edited April 8, 2011 in People
I'm still new to photography. It's more of a hobby on the side than anything. I know I need to work on the framing on the last two. However, bring on the critique. You can't learn if you don't know what you're doing wrong :thumb

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  • divamumdivamum Registered Users Posts: 9,021 Major grins
    edited April 7, 2011
    Crop the sky out of that first one and you have a jawdropper!!!!!!!!!!
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  • ShutterStaciShutterStaci Registered Users Posts: 43 Big grins
    edited April 7, 2011
    _DSC1266crop

    Thanks for the tip.
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  • PupWebPupWeb Registered Users Posts: 166 Major grins
    edited April 7, 2011
    Better with the cropped sky but she is too close to the edge. Keep her position to the right edge and crop the sky. Crop it landscape.

    #2 Cut off the top of her head and #3 her foot. You may have meant to do that but it looks unintentional.
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  • divamumdivamum Registered Users Posts: 9,021 Major grins
    edited April 7, 2011
    Agree that's too much from the rh side. I'd personally just go with a non-standard size - possibly to square - and just crop the top (maybe a bit from the bottom) and nothing from the sides. If you need to make it a standard size, stick it in a border/mat to make up the difference.
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  • Looking_SearchingLooking_Searching Registered Users Posts: 3 Beginner grinner
    edited April 8, 2011
    Nice! The first shot is killer.
  • reyvee61reyvee61 Registered Users Posts: 1,877 Major grins
    edited April 8, 2011
    Good start
    Agreed on the first one and I can't see the second rendering since Flickr says image unavailable...
    Second one crop is too tight top and bottom and generally a bit odd from left to right in relation to your subject.
    Third one is also a bit tight and I'm not a huge fan of magenta skin tone even if for artistic value.
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  • r3t1awr3ydr3t1awr3yd Registered Users Posts: 1,000 Major grins
    edited April 8, 2011
    The second shot IS cropped tight but it totally has the overall tone and look of a VERY commercial picture. Nice!
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